"I heard a shot"
There were three of them,
A girl and two men,
I only knew the girl,
I seen her around,
Met her downtown,
Today though,
She was unrecognizable,
No light in her eyes,
she passed me by,
The two men,
waited by her car,
I was just getting to the bar,
I heard a shot...
I looked up,
She stood over one of the men,
with a gun, pointed at the second,
It took just a second...
she shot him in the throat,
blood splashed all over her coat,
She got in her car,
I walked out,
people were screaming,
she was looking at me now,
She put the gun in her mouth....
WoW! Vicariously impressing!! For a while I walked in the shoes of both characters. Además la meetrica tiene ritmo y rima.
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